Our vincible band of writers
marched unseeingly on,
as the clichés flowed like hydrants
to extinguish wintry sun.
The images donned their armbands
for the struggle to the shore,
crawled through the sands of thens and ands;
the flotsam of the jaw.
The adjectives drowned the pronouns,
yet the adverbs missed their cue,
while the metaphors fought with similes
to outwit the plain and true.
Our vincible band of wordsmiths
described, unknowingly, on,
deconstructed by our verbiage.
The war of words not won.
*my thanks to @MrLondonStreet for the tweet that prompted this poem
(and brightened an otherwise gloomy day).
19 comments:
"our vincible band of wordsmiths" I thought this was great Sharon. Even a bad day can bring a good poem.
I don't know much about poems, but I really liked this. Especially the second stanza. Is it stanza? Well, you know what I mean in any case.
vincible wordsmiths.. a cool name for a writer's group
I am not much of a poet as you are aware, but I really love reading your poems. This was so good, I am very envious! It is lovely to be inspired by something through the day. In my case it will be this post!
Y'all should totally make some kind of official group, as says Shopgirl. The Vincible Wordsmiths...it demands a website of it's own. :)
Thanks for this latest lovely!
I love "the flotsam of the jaw". Fantastic!
Love this! Crawled through sands of thens and ands.. What a brilliant way with words. x
I just loved this, it redeemed an awful day. Let's do it. Let's raise vincibility to an art form.
Proud to be vincible.
Wow! The imagery in this is fantastic!
Guilty as charged:)
Our vincible band of wordsmiths... Indeed, a 21st Century Cafe society. And there, such wonderful company.
Wonderful imagery.
Love the idea of the Vincible Wordsmiths too.
I love poems about poems and poetry. Well done!
Philip - thank you.
OWO - yep it's a stanza, but I'm really glad you liked it whatever it's called.
Shopgirl - thank you! Vincible wordsmiths does seem to have a certain ring doesn't it?
Happy Frog - I'm incredibly pleased and flattered to think I might be an inspiration - thank you!
Dani - thank you - Vincible Wordsmiths seems to be gaining a life of its own, so keep an eye out for the website.
Baglady - thank you :)
Suzie - thanks for stopping by to read and leave a comment - much appreciated.
MLS - my thanks to you for being my muse!
Philip - I'm proud to join you in vincibility.
Creatively Sensitive - I'm really glad you liked it.
Pat - no charge, no guilt - we're all just playing with words
Jayne - it's a lovely idea isn't it - our own wonderful group of writers
Jane - I'm really pleased that you liked the poem and the idea of the Vincible Wordsmiths
Tom - hello! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment - much appreciated.
I loved this, Sharon. :)
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